Week 10 assignment. I think this is my best presentation so far
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly.
Well the feedback I got last time was all good and everyone seemed to like my project idea so I did not change anything about my presentation. All I could really think about changing was offering a wider variety of parts this app would recognize, like O-rings, and weirder hardware items.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Nothing, same script, and I am even wearing the same hat in this video!! I love my America Hat
Hey Stephen!, I think you have an awesome idea!, I think cool that you think you dint have to improve your pitch but in reality there are some aspects that could have been improved such as being in a place where we could better hear you and looking more professional when you are trying to sell your product.
ReplyDeleteother than those tips, good job!
feel free to checkout my pitch:
http://vifrasier.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-number-3-week-10.html
Hi Stephen,
ReplyDeleteFirst thing first I really like the concept you're pitching. While this app would be most useful with a customer base that is not "hardware savvy" and as such would not be able to easily identify the nut/bolt in questions, I also think that more experienced customers could use such an app to find stores that sell the item they're looking for (just an idea). With respect to your elevator pitch, I would recommend practicing a little more. While your pitch as it currently stands would work great when speaking with potential customers, I don't think it would be able to get app developers (needed to create the phone app) and/or investors on board. Keep at it, practice makes perfect.
If you have the time I would really appreciate some feedback on my elevator pitch!
http://justslothin.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey there Stephen,
ReplyDeleteYes sir this is an awesome idea! I truly hope to see this available one day. I am currently rebuilding my 1997 GMC K2500 Suburban and something like this probably couldn't even be assigned a value. My mechanical skills are definitely not what I would consider professional, and it still blows my mind when I watch my friend who works in his dad's shop to grab the right socket the 1st trip to the tray every time. Anyways, I've just finished up the transmission and suppose I will be in the engine compartment next, so this app couldn't be launched quick enough. Best of luck to you Stephen, hope everything goes well!
I think this is a great idea. I can see many people using this, and I know I would definitely use this app. I think you were able to explain your idea well in the elevator pitch. Also, you spoke clearly and I was interested in what you were saying. However, you could have dressed more professionally. Overall, this was a good elevator pitch and I do think you have a great idea. I think there are businesses that would be interested in this app, and might even help you make it. Check out my blog at http://luissoto93.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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