Okay, so I took some advice from everyone last time I did this. I am standing in this video and not sitting down. The camera is way back so its not as close. I have a prop for this presentation. I dont think everyone understood the concept last time. This tool can be used by individuals or companies as a whole. Dont think ace hardware and Home Depot. Although they might be customers I want you to think companies such as lockeed Martin and Northrup Grunman. Big companies that need close tolerance hardware for specific needs! So that is what I adjusted from the precious week. Thanks for the good feedback.
Hi Stephen. I think your idea would be a big help t a lot of people. Having an app that would allow you to find out what kind of hardware is needed for replacement would save a lot of time. Would you need to take multiple pictures so the system can accurately find the item? If you would like to look at my pitch here is the link. http://wjkms.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Stephen, I like the visual and detail you placed in your elevator pitch. I could really see that you took in consideration the feedback given to you. The only thing that I would suggest is putting away the visual when it is not in use to it is not distracting to the viewers. Overall, you did a great job. If you have the time you should check out my post: http://entoni3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Pretty cool idea you have and going with an app approach seems like the popular route nowadays with everyone attached to their devices. The idea does help out that market of people who may not know what they are doing or like you said, bigger companies with more specific hardware. I think you've really hit the specifics and have the makings of a great idea!
Check out my post if you get the chance to see my pitch: http://cthomasuf.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey, Stephen! I'm glad you were able to significantly improve your elevator pitch! Sitting and being too close to a camera vs standing and articulating your speech with a prop and a further camera distance definitely helped! I like how you addressed the specific buyers you want. Overall, your presentation went smoothly! Keep up the good work! Here's my link: http://alejandrogomezent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
Hi Stephen. I think your idea would be a big help t a lot of people. Having an app that would allow you to find out what kind of hardware is needed for replacement would save a lot of time. Would you need to take multiple pictures so the system can accurately find the item?
ReplyDeleteIf you would like to look at my pitch here is the link.
http://wjkms.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Stephen,
ReplyDeleteI like the visual and detail you placed in your elevator pitch. I could really see that you took in consideration the feedback given to you. The only thing that I would suggest is putting away the visual when it is not in use to it is not distracting to the viewers. Overall, you did a great job.
If you have the time you should check out my post:
http://entoni3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Stephen!
ReplyDeletePretty cool idea you have and going with an app approach seems like the popular route nowadays with everyone attached to their devices. The idea does help out that market of people who may not know what they are doing or like you said, bigger companies with more specific hardware. I think you've really hit the specifics and have the makings of a great idea!
Check out my post if you get the chance to see my pitch:
http://cthomasuf.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey, Stephen! I'm glad you were able to significantly improve your elevator pitch! Sitting and being too close to a camera vs standing and articulating your speech with a prop and a further camera distance definitely helped! I like how you addressed the specific buyers you want. Overall, your presentation went smoothly! Keep up the good work! Here's my link: http://alejandrogomezent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
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